@Frank342 this is a listing for an entire Studio apartment, but there is no (permanent) bed?
Where does the person who normally lives here sleep at night? Is the AirBed the permanent bed?
And what does "550 sq ft total; 250 sq ft cozy living space" mean? Do you not get the entire place?
Anyway, the place looks clean and cozy. The first shot is very good; it almost shows the whole place. I would actually recommend using *fewer* photos. There is a lot of repetition in the photos, and the extra photos actually make certain areas look worse. The 3 shots in the kitchen are essentially the same shot. As @Sarah977 mentioned, no one needs 3 shots of the toilet, especially with the lid open. (Yes, get a new shower curtain.)
Choose just the one best shot of each room and use that. How to fill out the rest of your photos? That is the next topic.
Your neighborhood: You can and should take photos of all the cool things in your neighborhood. This is Manhattan, right? No one comes to Manhattan to stay in the room. You go outside and enjoy the amazing local spots in the neighborhood. You go outside to soak up the amazing city. The room is just a place to sleep when you aren't outside.
Don't just describe your listing. SELL your listing. Tell us all about all the neat things we can see when we stay in your neighborhood. I don't know what they are, but I bet you do. What makes your area such a great place to live? What makes it unique? What will people remember when they visit? Paint a picture of all the uniquely New York things people can do when they stay with you. Make *that* the focus of your description.
No one is going to choose your place just because it has cable TV and a BluRay player. No one is looking for a place to stay because they want an electric stove and ample cabinet space. They are looking for a place in your area because they want to see frickin' New York City.
Talk about that.